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Modern Room by MasonButts Modern Room by MasonButts
A room I made using C4D and Vray. I modeled 95% of the room and textured it completely. Constructive criticism is welcome!
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ssafah Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
رائع جدا
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Aeonhem Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That's really nice! You obviously know something about colour! I did one of those tutorial rooms and it seems simple enough once you break it down, the tricky part was all the trial renders to see what settings worked best, I like your clutter too, and well done on those soft shadows!
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User1134 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This Is Amazing, Well Done,Sir!
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dAiheart Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to live in this wallpaper.
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lightsourcetrickster Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Balls to constructive critcism..this is fekkin' awesome!
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MasonButts Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks man means alot :D
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lightsourcetrickster Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
Any chance of you uploading the locker gadget that you did for this? Or do you already have it on dA somewhere?
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MasonButts Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what locker gadget? and are you talking about the desktop with all the widgets that a friend made? his name M7mdA7md7seinis
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lightsourcetrickster Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
That was to what I was referring yes. Googled the name but nothing came up :/
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MasonButts Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the name is his deviant art account name he commented on this a few comments down
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Titan303 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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Prototype516 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Simply astonishing mate. You do a lot of great work 8-)
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MasonButts Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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M7mdA7md7sein Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
More than perfect :) :)
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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M7mdA7md7sein Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
[link] :D
If You Don't Mind ^_^
Hope You Like It :D
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sp00k101 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey, congrats on the render! Looks nice, but you need to improve the carpet and the paining/photo above the bed. It doesn't work with the scene at all. The curtains need a bit more creases. The parquet in pretty good, the bed as well. Good job overall. And remember: practice makes perfect!
Cheers!
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback! and I agree completely with you...I cant wait to submit more!
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jsdu19 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice , you should try a Tilt-Shift effect on this picture
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What exactly is that?
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jsdu19 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
watch example on google images [link]
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automatte Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
I not good speak english. therefore my comments is simple.

bad:

-Carpet furs= too long.
-Wall graphic= too big.
-Cortains= more crinkles are well.
-Light= Low light is good. But i think more light (vray light: check "no decay=more light", "store with irradience map=more quality same render time")

good:

Ground and bed..

(sorry for bad english again) :)
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also where is the store with irradience map setting. Are you talking about C4D
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automatte Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
vray light parameters
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback, for the light i used a Infinite light which doesnt have decay, i agree with the curtain and rug feedback. Do you mean the picture on the wall or the floral white design on the wall. Also this is one of my first so I will look to improve :)
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automatte Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
np. floral white design on the wall.
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Webwoman Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Professional Writer
This is beautiful, really good, just a tad dark for me and the window treatments a bit unrealistic, not flowing, truly good work, I love it
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback...and I agree, it was hard to get the settings in Vray spot on since im just a beginner with it.
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Webwoman Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Not to worry, it really is great work and as a beginner you are doing very very well...thank you for sharing your work with us
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Freelancer604 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The shaders are incredible! It didnt catch my eye for a while, but Id say that the material on the tall lamp (left) is the weakest link in this amazing render.
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MasonButts Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree the lamp was kinda to make the room seem less empty. Thanks alot for the feedback!
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